Sweat made my clothes stick. I finally found him in the greenhouse.
“Need help?” he said… unsure.
I slogged through muddy thoughts; bath, dinner- produce still low; new fertiliser, new supplier?
He waited, annoyed.
“I’m fine,” I said, words too stuck. I left.
That night I dreamed of tangible thoughts, tendrils reaching, seeking connection. He welcomed them, and I saw myself through his eyes, but without anger, just-
Love.
Early next morning, he rolled over, “you finally tried that new neural-dreamware, how’d it go?”
“Uh, I-” I smirked, “love you too?”
He grinned, “never doubted it, muddiness and all.”
© 2021 Rebecca Glaessner
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In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that embraces the mud. What is the mud, real or metaphor? How does it transform a character or place? What happens? Go where the prompt leads!
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Going inside someone else’s mind and thoughts would be really cool. But I’m not sure that I’d ever want anyone inside of mine!
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I think most people would share that sentiment, Michael, I know a few who would straight up decline without a second thought.
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Relationships can be muddy on many levels. I love the idea of connecting through dreams(ware).
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Me too. I’ve been fascinated by seeing into the minds of others, if only to understand them better and deeper, without all of the murkiness of typical human communication. I think this tech could be a wondrous thing.
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Wow, what a take on the prompt! Good stuff, that neural dream-ware. A filter for the murky mud of any relationship. Cool beans, Rebecca.
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Thanks D! Yep, there are days I wish I had this tech. Years of self work accomplished in a single night. Would be a doozy for political negotiations.
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I just want to filter nightmares!
I’ve stopped watching the news. But I still watch and read murder mysteries ;)
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Murder mysteries are fun because they’re fiction! (Mostly) I’m right with you there. We’re just getting through the 6th (third last) season of Castle now. It’s definitely better than real world horrors. Bloody corpses and all.
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Oh, this is a wonderfully romantic piece. I love the muddiness comment at the end. <3
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Thanks so much Colleen! I’m glad the love came through. Muddiness tends to be a regular occurrence in the real world for our little family.
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Aww, that’s just how it is sometimes. ❤️
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Love the image. Love the story. Both a perfect match. Like the couple in the story, now they are Beta-ing the dreamware. What a great idea.
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Thanks Norah. Wonderful to hear you enjoyed this little piece. I wasn’t entirely comfortable putting it out there, but most readers have spoken highly of it, I guess it really does pay to be a bit vulnerable.
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Sometimes we need to take a risk. In fact, I think we do that every time we put our writing out for others to read.
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Nice embrace of mud there, Rebecca. Less sci-fi, more romance. It works well. ~nan
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Thanks Nan, glad this piece worked for you, I was feeling less than confident about putting it out there.
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Short and Sweet Love tale ❣️😍 Loved it Rebecca 🥰 Wish you a lovely Weekend ❤️
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It is a bit of a softer change from my usual pieces. Thanks Simon 😊 you have a wonderful weekend too!
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