The grounds shuddered. The air hummed along with urgency.
Something was happening.
Its kin at rest, a lone creature emerged from its dwelling, peering out toward the meeting line of void and land.
The hum grew violent as the void tore open with a flash. From the tear, a being of another kind tumbled into the creature’s world. Grounds shaking beneath them, the being heaved upright and cried out as it lunged toward the closing tear, but the hum stopped, the lands stilled.
The visitor remained.
It discovered its onlooker and both understood, the visitor was there to stay.
© 2021 Rebecca Glaessner
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Wow, that’s quite an entrance. Reminds me of a scene in one of the Avengers movies (I think).
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Yes I think you might be right, I can’t think of which either though haha luckily we’re doing a weekly marathon of the marvel movies with the kids, so I’ll have the answer soon! Glad you felt the excitement of this one Norah
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Enjoy the Marvel movies. They’re great for a bit of escapist fun. Let me know when you find out which one. :)
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I’m thinking it could be the first Thor, which we’ve watched already, where he gets sent to Earth without his powers, and the main character (human) hits him with her car and knocks him out, then he wakes up a rambling loon 🤔
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Sounds plausible. :)
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You make me enjoy sci-fi, Rebecca! The scene popped visually, and then I felt the potential emotions on both sides of the realization that the visitor was there to stay. You do that well — you build tension and excitement but then you allow for the human emotions to slowly rise. I’d say that’s part of your voice as an author.
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Thanks for your kind words, Charli. Us writers work so hard to discover our voice, it’s nice to feel it emerging and to have others experience the evidence of it too. Writing polished pieces on a vast array of concepts and themes, week after week, has been invaluable. I’m glad you’re enjoying my little slice of the sci-fi realm too, it’s become a mission of mine to encourage positivity and hope in humanity and technology through the genre. If I can intrigue readers to feel and think through these stories, I’m doing what I dream to be.
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You are already living the dream.
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I’ve watched so much Sci Fi that I can picture this with clarity!
I went with sort of a BoTS… (based on a true story) :D
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Thanks Jules, I’ll be over soon to check out your BoTS response.
P.S. Apologies for the lack of email reply also, I can confirm I’ve received and read it though!
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No worries about the email… I wasn’t sure if it ended up in spam… but real life has to come first :D
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Wow! another amazing story to the beginning of something, that decided to stay🤓, Sci Fi – everywhere..❤️ Good one again🎉 Have a lovely day Rebecca 😍
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Thanks Simon! You too 😊
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