“Hanniah likes lego for fractions,” he said, packing a bag to leave.
“Of course,” she said.
Of all the teachers, he could trust her. She’d take care of the kids.
He knew this.
“And Kione needs to ask lots of questions. Answer them all, please,” he scanned the room for remaining valuables.
“Always.”
Sirens blared in the distance.
“I have to go. Please make sure-“
“Everyone knows it wasn’t you,” she touched his shoulder, “time to hit the road, Jack.”
He smiled, shaking his head, “humans.”
But their laughter felt hollow.
He left, watching home shrink in his rear-view.
© 2021 Rebecca Glaessner
April 29, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the phrase, “hit the road, Jack.” You can interpret the phrase any way you like — road trip, goodbye, or story. Go where the prompt leads!
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Your story really pulled me in. I love the advice for the teacher. Let’s follow the child’s lead – good one. Now I want to know what it is that Jack didn’t do, what he is escaping from. What a challenging puzzle.
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It’s always best to let the child lead. And I’m glad his story has pulled you in Norah! I like this guy, I’m looking forward to where his path leads.
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I’m sure it will be fascinating.
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His concern for the kid’s education adds to who he is as a character.
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Thanks Charli, I’m glad his concern could be felt
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I totally got the legos. The old style ones could almost be Cuisinaire rods. But always have Cuisinire rods. But I digress.
Is the teacher on the run not of this planet????
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I love lego! Such a relaxing pastime, as well as all the awesome space sets being released.
About the teacher, you are correct, in a way..
Thanks for stopping by!
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I’m intrigued by ‘likes lego for fractions’.
Fascinating piece, Rebecca
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Using preferred toys to help children learn is an almost foolproof tactic (after that, the teacher’s attitude comes into play).
Lego is a personal favourite. Right now I’m building the lunar landing module set.
Thanks for reading Ceayr!
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I like the picture it begins to set the feeling for the flash, your interpretation is great the piece evokes the emotion of Jack. very nice.
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I’m glad the main character’s emotions came through. It’s always tricky with 99 words. Thanks for stopping by!
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You nailed it.
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